Massa Family Coat of Arms

Your picture is great, in the spirit of tatto, so based on your comment (the drawing is based on a tattoo) you've hit the target. My only comment would be for the parchment, the edge could be sharper to give it a thinner, look, like a flat band of parchment. Same for when the parchment rolls, on the sides, the light edges should also be sharper otherwise it looks like it's round instead of flat. I hope you see what I mean, this is my first critique ever, I hope it was constructive.in any case I came on your page because I thought your pic was ace! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="392" title=" (Smile)"/>